A beautiful remembrance of a stressful/blessed time. Especially knowing that she grew up to be a healthy child! I would love to read the events leading up to this first sneeze.
Beautiful...
Thanks for your comment on The First Sneeze. I like your writing a lot too x
This book was such a nice way to show how you would feel when you have a new-born. I like this book alot. Even though it was kind of small. You should write more storys like this one. Possibly longer if you want. I would love to read more storys like the one you wrote and the one I just read. The story in a way was kind of funny because the little baby had to wear doll clothes. Now that was funny and cute. Anyway keep writing... Show more
This book was such a nice way to show how you would feel when you have a new-born. I like this book alot. Even though it was kind of small. You should write more storys like this one. Possibly longer if you want. I would love to read more storys like the one you wrote and the one I just read. The story in a way was kind of funny because the little baby had to wear doll clothes. Now that was funny and cute. Anyway keep writing... Show more
Thanks Scribbler, I'm glad you like the story. You're right, it is very short, but that's because it was a ten minute writing exercise. It just all poured out and I wouldn't want to make it longer now. How's your writing going? Good luck with it,
Miranda
Aww, that's all I could say. This I THE GREATEST STORY EVER!! Thank you for sharing!