my biggest complaint is that this "book" makes a great first couple of chapters. there isnt nearly enough of it! just when im getting in to it it aburptly stops!! and as of yet this websit hasn't made the next book available for me to read. when it does i seriously hope that there is more to it then 81 pages and that im not left hanging like this again. other then that really enjoyed it.
Granted I only got as far as page 9, but my initial impressions are of a character that took no work to create, a severe tendency to more words than are actually necessary, and an inability to show rather than tell.
Maybe I'm being too harsh, because it's early in the morning and I've not taken my meds yet. But those are my thoughts thus far. They don't necessarily mean this is a bad book - I haven't read nearly enough of it... Show more
