Heartbreak

By:
meowschu
User: meowschu
Heartbreak
Hi! I wrote this story for my NAPLAN test. It's all pretty much how i wrote it for the test, I just edited a few mistakes. I also planned a different ending but ran out of time so I did this instead. It's pretty short but I hope you enjoy it. Please comment and give me feedback/tell me what you think. Thanks! :)

  • Short Story
  • 579 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 396
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 04-28-2011
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lonelybutterfly95
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lonelybutterfly95

I like it a lot, but how did Yulia's mother die? Will you continue the story?

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meowschu
meowschu

thank you :-)
I am not sure how Yulia's mother died since I wrote this from the top of my head and didn't have much time to think and plan.
I have been thinking about continuing the story, though I am not sure whether I should start it again or continue it.
And I am also writing... Show more

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