The Conversation

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The Conversation
During a storm, after the electricity goes out, Ben has a conversation with his wife, Maggie that he could never have imagined.
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  • Thriller
  • 1046 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 757
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 11-11-2013
  • ISBN: 978-3-7309-6128-5
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Ashon Thadon
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Ashon Thadon

nice intro...very good...good insight on the last page that makes me want to know more

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felixthecat
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felixthecat

Mary, you have this unique voice and writing style...so smooth and descriptive; so inviting for the reader. The little foreshadowing hints you've provided give me clues as to what is really going to be unveiled once you finish this intriguing little beginning.
So well done, as usual!

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MaryMorrison
MaryMorrison

Thank you, thank you!

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