BookRix

Nicely done.

For one with such a pretty face, you have a very dark side. A very dark side.....And yep, I like it.....

I really like it :)

Very nice.

"But today is a new start; Today is point zero" I love that! great poem!

"Yet everything has an end, even pain" - That is a great line!

I like how coherent this is - easy to follow and easy to feel the emotions searing through each word. Great job!

This gave me goosebumbs! Good job!

This was a very interesting poem. Your use of words was impressive is your command of structure for the most part, my only critical statement would be a couple lines that didn't flow quite as well as the others. Overall though, I enjoyed it :)

I like how raw this is :) great job

Heavy!