An Ode to a Princess with Smiling Eyes

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lazarus67
User: lazarus67
An Ode to a Princess with Smiling Eyes
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Deleted User

Such a beautiful piece, with a truly ageless poetry style.

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Thanks...I almost forgot I had this one. Been a long time since someone read it and commented.

Deleted User

I was browsing and chanced upon this one. Glad I did :)

lazarus67
lazarus67

Maybe if you wish, and since I have so many short stories, I can recommend a few.

Deleted User

Sure :)

lazarus67
lazarus67

http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lazarus-erinmore-and-the-lost-children/
You might like this one...if you haven't read it already

ERINMORE and The Lost Children http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-lazarus-erinmore-and-the-lost-children/ A young girls finds herself on a strange dreamlike mission
mysterywriter723
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mysterywriter723

This sounds like a tribute to your lovely wife. Written so elegantly and descriptively. Blended perfectly through the usage of metaphors and similes, which you are a master at using. Excellent piece of art!

Rgabel
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Rgabel

Obviously you have experienced smiling eyes that have captured your heart! Beautifully poetic and realistic.

gooduklady
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gooduklady

You are indeed an artist, my friend, in more ways than one. You can write poems, fairy stories, short stories, winning drabbles, take photos, do graphics.....such a talent.

Love the poem. Val

blackbeard
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blackbeard

"In my old age, should my windows become dim and the shades be pulled down low, I would(will ?) never forget the vision of her smiling eyes,.....

What a beautiful sentance, Laz. Congrats!

Jack

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lazarus67
lazarus67

Thanks Jack...mercifully....I'm not there yet.
Laz

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