A little late in catching up on some very worthwhile reading. Nice embellishments and twists to the beginnings of "the greatest story ever told". Nicely done, Laz.
A new approach to a timeless tale. Fact, myth and fiction combine to create a peek into the past. It has a very 'myth' type feel to it. As always, you manage to give the reader the 'feel' of time and place. Felt like I've just had a ride on a comet! Good job Laz. Happy New Year
As usual Laz you're inventive and creative talents shine like a star in the sky. I loved it. and timely for me and my mood. Keep writing. Hope all is well with you. storyteller4
What an interesting twist on a time-honored story! Loved it.
A nice way to tell the Story.
Wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year.
Greetings, Eve
Nice bit of historical fiction. I love when a new telling can revive some of the awe and mystery in an old story.
That's the genre I was referencing: fiction that fills in the details surrounding historical events.
Yep, time for me to shut down as well. Good night.
Nite
Thanks Robyn