BookRix

I struggled through the first couple pages, but it was just too hard to read. I think you have a good storyline here, it just needs a little proofreading. If you need some help with the proofreading, I'll be happy to help. My email is cwinfield@ccsuvt.org.

Heyyy:)
your story was great but i felt so sorry for shadow when his mum died. you are a great writer

From Annaxx

km i have read some peeps storys but ur is just too good u put alot of effert cool amazing good :]