As usual your writing is exquisite . The story reads as poetry and love. very nice./joeparente Star1
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I do understand your concern Kalai. But then, you limit your skills within a narrow circle when u can expand it. Think of other people too. (for example, a sportsman trying to come up despite all the odds loaded against him, a scientist's life, a police constable, a good and honest person taken for a ride and being cheated by people whom he believes the most, etc.,)
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Though the flow is good and the story is good, isn't it time you think beyond the bus numbered AYI2135 and writing about the crew? Do not limit yourself and let it your imagination go beyond the MTC bus to other locales too.
