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The craziest part about me reading this book is that I'm listening to a song about a girl who sacrificed her self for some one she cared about.

Very creative story. I like how you used such a dark setting to establish the mood. Very brave and courageous heroine who broke her own rules to save Jack. Great story.

i like it and i like the cover.

for our book of the week contest in BetterWriters, but I'm afraid I can't comment because it's in the writer of the year competition. Sorry.
xx

Juliet, this is one heckofa story! I paid attention as I read to the run of grammatical superlatives in your writing. Darn, I picked up some pointers.
But this...your forest portion in some strange, wonderful way, took me back to The Two Towers, so filled with tension and darkness as it was:) You are not Tolkien, you don't write like he did, but you have his imagination and a clear grasp of story structure, use of language, and scene development. Impressive.

I was less enamored with the short fight scene in the castle, which reminded me of something on TV (Forgive that crude comparison). This against the beauty of the preceding storyline. As well, the confrontation with the dark lord seemed clipped, as though in your writer's excitement you wanted to get to the end. I know the feeling.
But, the story was great, showcasing your obvious talent.

I am thrilled to say I found your story flawless. I have also read your book, Rain on my Wings and enjoy your writing immensely.

Jack has been taken by the wicked Scabbers, and Clara must rescue him before it’s too late.

Your imagination and wonderful writing allowed me to see Everwood. To feel the thorns as they tore at Clara’s clothing. To travel along side her as she ventured deep in the forest, and was frightened by the sounds and voices she heard. Because of the quality of your writing , the forest came alive. The voices of Everwood led people to their deaths, and Clara was forced to cover her ears in order to silence the voices for her own safety. She had to call on her inner strength and move on for Jack’s sake. Breaking out of the trees with the end in sight she ran in circles, and when she realized what had happened, she lost all hope, and then fell asleep. The next day when she woke, she found the castle in front of her, and her hope was restored.

To find out more, read this wonderful story, which reminded me of an updated fairy tale.

No question you have my vote.

Laz,
Thank you! That seriously means so much coming from you. I am so glad you enjoyed the story, and the cover. I wish I could've written more than just 3,000 words. But especially thank you for the vote.
-Juliet

Forgot to mention...love your cover.

Good story...well presented.
A bit of a cliffhanger...lol.
Voted.