I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS BOOK. I FELT BAD FOR THE OLDER MAN LOSING HIS WIFE AND SON.
Hi John!
I enjoyed reading your story. The title and description caught my eye, it's a story I can definitely relate to. Although it was short and ended a little abruptly, I think it was developed very well. The dialogue and characters were believable. I really feel bad for the homeless guy, I was kind of hoping she'd give him her $2, ha ha.
Good luck in the contest. And if you want, you can check out my story "paint peels... Show more
Thanks for the comment. Anyone who writes needs encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed it.