Credit to the original author (who wishes to remain anonymous.) Thank you, I like it. I decided to keep it in it's original text instead of altering it.
Thank you very much editor.dreaming, I understand what you mean and the honest review you have given me is what I'm looking for. It was hard to write it because it's not even my style or typical of what I write. That's why the need for reviews before making it public.
With great appreciation,
John.
Thanks for your help. I appreciate this. Please elaborate on what you meant by "missed words here and there" does this refer to my grammar? I always had trouble with tenses.
As for the humour what concerns me about this particular piece is that it's not typical of my sense of humour so I imitated what "everyone else" seems to like, I only refrained from writing in what I really wouldn't want to put in (such as more abusive... Show more
What worries me, is that we as writers put a little of ourselves into each of our projects! LOL So I suspect you have a wicked sense of humor! You did a very good job of capturing the adolescent side of humor at this age. Each chapter pulled me in to see what prank would occur next. The responses of his classmates rang true to life. Your surprise ending was a delight, and unexpected. I felt relief for the group as well! I... Show more
Thanks Eric. Man, it's been so long since I've logged in. I have a lot of remembering and catching-up to do.