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i can relate to alot of it...
i love the book

i like how u put ur expestion it feel so real.

i love it^-^

Brilliant book.

awesome but really really sad book

thank you very much

There are good sides to life you know.
I was abused and my life never seem to be full.
But that was because I refrained from filling it.
Wake up every morning telling yourself that you can an you will!
Great poetry though! I like it!

this book is good

thank you to all, i have improved on my poetry and currently trying to have them published. I really appreciate those that took the time to read and understand my emotions present in my words. i wish for all writers the best of writing. Thank YOU

Hi John,

I understand your work. Raw, unleashed emotion is hard for some people to grasp. I felt a good rythm in some parts of your work but the meter was off just a little. YOU CAN arrive at a place where your raw emotion comes out in a rythm and meter that makes it easier for others to read. Don't change your story though, no matter if a few people thought it was immature. I am a survivor like you, and my inner child writes wonderful stories that people love. Not everyone will want to read our stories, not everyone loves dance, or classical music. Those who do not like your work can simply move on.
Be Blessed in your healing. You have the courage of a lion.
Pamela