Well Adjusted...

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Well Adjusted...
A rough excerpt from work in progress.

Keywords: 
Gram, Childhood, Memories
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Rgabel

I take it you are new to Bookrix. I have only been here a couple of months but have learned a lot. I read Well Adjusted and really liked the story flow. I like the character descriptions, you give just enough to make each person interesting. It kept my interest, I continued reading, wanting to know where the story was going. I would make only one small change, only because it interrupted my flow of concentration. Pg 6 - "it... Show more

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jencannpro

Thank you so much for reading. It means so much to have feedback from objective observers who do not know me personally.

I am so glad you liked it!

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