This was so funny! I couldn't believe the way you rhymed every line. VERY clever and a thoroughly enjoyable read!
A very funny poem!
Unfortunately, some of the lines I couldn't understand, or at least I couldn't tell who was speaking. Sometimes I didn't even know what the lines were trying to say. Like when the goat was talking about how there was more than one gold bird. I got the basic idea of what she was saying, but still didn't really understand why there was more than one golden bird.
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i like the book. it looks like a poem to me too. but, i will like it if you added something more.
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