So, did you leave it hanging in the murder scene for a surprise ending? LOL You have a definite style all your own. I felt the pain of this lonely teenager. She definitely has a lot going on in her life. Your writing is simple and direct. But like all of us, you need some editing on spelling and a few missing words. So I would like to read what happens next when..... Robynn
Pain
A Story about Sara Johnson's Life By: Jamie GamblinKeywords:
pain, and adventure
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