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You are doing great! The punctuation was so much better. Sentence structure getting better. Still struggling with the right flow of the wording, still missing some joiners like 'the' 'and' and a few others. Good picture, great story idea, like the hook. Such an imagination Hima! Want to see where this story goes. Robynn
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Nice Cover, You should Check take a look at the cover of my book Grimalkin.