BookRix

Check out my short story if you like fantasy: https://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-debora-pint-people-of-the-dragon/

your really good!

it good.plz write more

Nice story you have a good idea here

LUV BUT U NEED TO REWRITE IT

ANd one more thing you should read the books and see if they match for yourself

you need to fix some things or re-write because the 1 book and the second book don't match so I am a little confused

i enjoyed it like the first book.

the first is called forbidden

I loved it! when is the next one coming out?