That's really good! :) I'm on Moshi Monsters too, I'm jazzyb2012.
Very sweet and cute book. Also, your grammar and spelling is very good. Well done :)
(If you're on Moshi Monsters, I'm chocolatemeerkat on there as well. I have a Furi called Yeti)
It was a really well and cute written book! :) You write adventure books really well! :) Please let me know when you update or add the next book to it. Over all you did a spectacular job! :)