BookRix

work of mine. I was asked to join this comp. and at first it seemed hard, but I hit on changing the form and the name but the person is correct. I bet he is too. Glad you liked it, Evelyn/Bluedragon

Seems our Laz is a popular guy and easy to incorporate into just about any genre of story, Evelyn. I'm betting he's smiling ear-to-ear, reading all these stories about his exploits. In yours he is an ace soccer star, lol, and won the girl again.
Nice, nice flow to your writing.

thanks for the heart Evelyn/Bluedragon

that should have been The Coffe Shop contest. Can not see this keyboard tonight. Evelyn/Bluedragon

It was a quickie for a comp. i n Serious Writers. Thanks for reading itr, Evelyn/Bluedragon

Loved the ending. Sly as a fox he was, he had to have her one way or another. Your writing is good as always.