BookRix

This is.... Wow.... All I can think to say is, wow! I do hope there is more to come of this tale!

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and hopefully I can expand on this story in the future!

You have a great job in detailing so that you feel you can see or hear what you are talking about. I loved this book.
Great job

:D I'm really glad you liked it! It was actually really hard to stop writing. I'm tempted at some point to turn this into a full fledged story if I could flesh out a way to further the plot.

I love it, I like the way you describe everything, the description of the leaves at the beginning was wonderful. I like the way the scene was set, I am a fan!