David and Stacey,
I really liked the story, but I feel so sorry for Laz being killed off.
You two have done an excellent job of
pulling together an interesting coffee shop story which includes some of our most well known bookrix friends.
Excellent writing :)
This was fabulous! And I love how you had yourself as the culprit. Great story. :)
I really felt like I was in the story, haha! But no, I truly did. You have a way of captivating your audience, and you certainly did that for me. I lost count of how many times I dissolved into bemused chuckles. I like to believe everyone would survive a BookRix meeting, but you can never be too sure! XD
"What do you think? You've commented on his rants."
Loved that line :3
Kudos to you!
Well done David and Stacey. A great piece of writing and a story close to all our hearts. A worthy contender in this contest if ever i saw one.
One crit. Why wasn't I in it? I do great murders :-) Maybe the sequel? lol
Good luck
Love Wendyxxx