The Coffee Shop Murder

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The Coffee Shop Murder
A murder occurs in a coffee shop...who is the killer?

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Deleted User

oh no!!!! what a great read! why so short?!

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UniquePoet60

David and Stacey,

I really liked the story, but I feel so sorry for Laz being killed off.

You two have done an excellent job of
pulling together an interesting coffee shop story which includes some of our most well known bookrix friends.

Excellent writing :)

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stevie.grace

This was fabulous! And I love how you had yourself as the culprit. Great story. :)

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vamp123

I enjoyed this wish there was more to it I'm fairly new to bookrix and are starting to no the names of people that write so it was fun to read

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yezall

Dodged that bullet, y'all didn't even know I was in the back room and shot him with a poison dart... Doh!

Great story, made me laugh!

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lazarus67

Boo hoo, Nobody commented on the poor murder victim...so sad. I heard he was a really nice guy. And the real reason he was killed was because he sold those covers too cheaply, and David couldn't match the price.

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Paper Planes

I really felt like I was in the story, haha! But no, I truly did. You have a way of captivating your audience, and you certainly did that for me. I lost count of how many times I dissolved into bemused chuckles. I like to believe everyone would survive a BookRix meeting, but you can never be too sure! XD

"What do you think? You've commented on his rants."

Loved that line :3

Kudos to you!

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writingmum

Well done David and Stacey. A great piece of writing and a story close to all our hearts. A worthy contender in this contest if ever i saw one.

One crit. Why wasn't I in it? I do great murders :-) Maybe the sequel? lol

Good luck
Love Wendyxxx

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sereni

Loved your story and found it very amusing . Well written mystery. :) Serena

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