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i said i was going to read one of ur books, but iv read the others so i had this 1 left.....dude i was expectin tht.....i mean wow....even though i didnt no Oliver or Madison or Millie all tht well im still sad....guys r dead, Millie is proabably dyin, u gotta ryt mre....i mean ya cnt leave it ther,,,, plaz ryt more!! :D

Okay you have my attention, now don't leave me hanging.Let me know what happens with Millie.

Dang, Edan...you ALWAYS do this!
So what happens next?????

You do have a great way of keeping tension so alive. My only question is, when your protagonist pulls Millie's purse over and opens it in the dark, you describe the colors red and black. COULD he have noticed this?
But...it's excellent writing...again!

I already had a plot for this and this was only going to be the first chapter, but it never got anywhere. So I shall try to revive it :3