i read 100 pages of this book and i couldnt beleive that they killed like that but they did it with the sense of right and worng nown days pepole kill for money jelwery and drugs plus how they the two boys and gave them sum work was manly and respectble i like this book alot hope to read more like it
I tried to get some folks to proof read my book and let me know the errors, but had no luck. Thanks for the compliment and the input. I really do appreciate it. Frank
(caluphallison@embarqmail.com)
Hi c.f. I am in the middle of reading your book.I think the story content is fantastic! The punctuation and sentence structure needs some work. Try proof reading or letting someone proof read this complete story. Sometimes another person can pick out some errors that you may have passed by. I make these comments because I think you have a lot of talent and this book is worth the effort. Let me know after editing and I will... Show more
Great book thru page 64-- hope the rest is as good!!
thank you for your kind words, you'll find the rest of the book only gets better
great book about a "real" man
Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate your input.
C.F. Allison
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