Thank you for the comment! I will take the advice to heart. I wrote this before I knew about how to properly indent things and yada yada so hopefully this summer I will get everything cleaned up. This book is probably one of my favorites to work on, but with every book I write, I try to go for a new style so that none of them are the same! :)
I read the first chapter. It's refreshing to see a story clean and well edited, punctuation and grammar in order. You need to work on your paragraphing, either by indenting or double spacing. It will make for an easier read.
I see the plot, but your topic/genre isn't one I normally read. But for readers who enjoy this form, it would undoubtedly hold their interest.
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Hey Everyone! @bookrix-loooong time no see! :P To both of you VVV THANKS SO MUCH! Your comments make my day! Thanks luce for being so faithful and patient....I move at the pace of a snail. SORRY! School's getting tougher, but summer's right around the corner and I will go on a writing splurge! :) good day to you both!
I think that your book is pretty awesome and that it has a future ahead of it. If you don't mind, I would like to add to this comment that it sounds like a real book! Good job, and I hope that it goes a long way.
Haha I completely agree! And I sincerely apologize for writing at the pace of a snail. Doing two school grades at once kind of takes up all my time, but I will try to make room for writing!