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I loved "Knotted". Its just perfect. You're a really good writer. Keep writing and please tell me when you update this. <3 c:

"The knot's gotta come out sometime."

Excellent emotion displayed; the ideas presented are very thought-provoking; the poems speak out to me.

If you were to speak to me directly, you'd find me as a very opinion-reserved person (even taking on a cowboy look for myself, because of that!) But through writing, I can express the advantageous, soul-searching side of my own personality. It's amazing how we can draw upon our experiences and images and build a story.

Here, in these poems, you present a side to human character you feel is just because of present situations. Work on it, anchor it in even more, and you'll find such great satisfaction. Absolutely fantastic!

Thanks(: Its still a work in prgress though so keep checking on it

Not bad, good use of free verse to show your feelings. Make sure that you alternate "showing" with your "telling". Apart from that, nice poetry writing.