Fire in the Sky

The telling of a magical night of shooting stars By:
Fire in the Sky
The night of a beautiful meteor shower, told from the point of view of a teenage girl.

  • Short Story
  • 946 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 598
  • 7
  • Publication Date: 08-28-2010
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hennaolivia.
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hennaolivia.

This is a really great story! The way you described it was awesome! :)

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Demonata-Freak
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Demonata-Freak

i actaully liked it:) the only thing would b is, u said her eyes wer green 2 many times thts all :)

bravefire43
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bravefire43

I'm confused...oh well, what did you think was bad about it? Perhaps some positive criticism could help my future stories.

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