cinderella- a different ending

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daisy8400
User: daisy8400
cinderella- a different ending
  • Fairy Tale
  • 464 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 3334
  • 39
  • Publication Date: 08-29-2010
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david
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david

like, maybe could have made it a bit longer, then the reader would be lulled into........whatever.

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misslivvie
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misslivvie

This actually made me smile. You were so creative and funny with it! You could definitely have a future in humor writing :) There were some spelling and grammar errors, which might put off some potential readers, but if you fix those up, you have a fun story :)

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david
david

I agree about spelling and grammar, liked the ending too.

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