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I've read a number of your haiku-like poems. The book is very long so I was not able to read it all. In some of the pieces you unnecessarily invert normal word order. Why? Wd you like to look at my book? Page 2, "You've Got To Be Joking." Wd welcome your comments.

elcampbell

Beautiful work, but a bit repetitious. Editing a bit to create a better flow might cause more people to stop by and read. God bless and good luck.

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Like the orgasam of the Ant Queen, to paraphrase the author. Azsacra takes you through the animal kingdom as Dante lead us through hell in the Inferno.

My only qualm would be that at 150 pages the work does tend to go beyong being thematic and starts becoming repetitous. This is easily a four star or evern 5 star work if the author condenses aspects of the material.

Obviously, this is just my opinion, but if a framework for the poetry whereby some of the poems concern the moths, others, the bees, and others flowers instead of all of them intertwining all of those characters and elements.

Given that there isn't a 3.5 that you can give I'll go with 4 stars as this work is very recommendable.