I clicked on your link, then on the "Read Book" button, and winced. More and more these days I find myself reading stories here that are so poorly-written as to be all but incomprehensible. They're almost all about class-mate abuse, revenge, supernatural beings whining about what "female" gets the alpha. Same story over and over and over, different names, same stupid skinny jeans...
And then I read this. There are three, maybe... Show more
I clicked on your link, then on the "Read Book" button, and winced. More and more these days I find myself reading stories here that are so poorly-written as to be all but incomprehensible. They're almost all about class-mate abuse, revenge, supernatural beings whining about what "female" gets the alpha. Same story over and over and over, different names, same stupid skinny jeans...
And then I read this. There are three, maybe four minor errors. But the rest is beautiful writing, insightful observations and a character with self-awareness that I rarely see in the works of new writers. And best of all, this is a complete work - one with a well-conceived story arc, one that kept me reading, one that made me feel what the main character was feeling. And you did it all in what - seven pages? And without even giving the character a name or gender, you succeeded in giving her/him a soul.
Thank you for sharing your talent. This was delightful and wonderful - wow!
haha well I am very glad that I have not been a contributor to the eye bleeding so far! thank you for reading!!!
Read it...love it...well written ( some minor errors) but yes loved it..got potential...