BookRix

The blurp should be one family not on family

Just curious, how did you change the color of the font on you book cover?

This is one of THE BEST short stories I have ever read. I really think you should write a second book. This is wonderfully done. KEEP WRITING AND NEVER STOP!!!

Very nicely done, Ark.
Warmest regards,
CJ

Think brill is short for brilliant in that person case lol

I loved it, please keep them coming and don't stop ;D Good luck in the contest.

Wow! What a great read!!!! This book totally deserves to win! You've got my vote, both here and in the wildcard nomination. Good luck!!!

Voted.
Wendy

As been stated there are grammatical errors and editing you need to do but the story itself is good...enjoyed reading it...

I did enjoy it. Also the way you interacted with so many characters in your story was very good. I find that not everyone can do that very well. Good job!!

Thanks, I have many more good stories in me whenever I get around to finishing them.