I enjoyed your story very much indeed. It had a poignancy to it that touched me. I am not certain if English is your first language but I feel you could improve on a very fine work by having someone edit your grammar. Your tenses sometimes were mixed up...but apart from those small issues, the book itself was lovely. Valerie
Thank you for reading and thank you for the critique.
My language is Spanish and the story was not edited.
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Anna
Very forceful in its strong, stark realism. It leaves one with a sigh that goes deeper than pity. One of the best stories on this site.
Thank you for your kind words
Anna Maria
Wunderbar einfach geschrieben, ich hab es gelesen, verstanden, schreibe aber zu wenig Englisch, muss es in Deutsch tun: eine alltägliche Geschichte,die gerade in ihrer Schlichtheit anrührt und wohl von jedem Menschen nachvollzogen werden kann.Anna Maria, to da rabah shell Tilken
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