Masked Wolves

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User: iamkira
Masked Wolves
after a wolf finds her fathers mask she soon finds out who she is

Keywords: 
wolves, mystery, fiction
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ok good start. few typos, but those can be fixed pretty easily. One thing: in the title, 'Wolfs' should be 'Wolves'.
Pg 5-'cub' should be 'pup'(the actual name for a young wolf is pup), 'there' should be 'their', I would suggest changing 'that full moon was different though it started like always...'. Period between 'though' and 'it'. 'Alfas' should be 'Alphas' and in 'I was just a cub so i don't...' the second i needs to be... Show more

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