BookRix

Wow! What a powerful story. For those of us who have lived a nightmare as a child this touches deep. Yes, there are monsters in the world--just look around you. Wonderful story telling.

seroisly good, buts sad 2 L(
but i enjoyed it, love the way

omg best book ever its so sad too but this is a book all schools should have because we just had a presintashon about this and this book is amazing and acuret

WOW!
I loved loved LOVED it!!
It is such an amazing story!

Its so awesome and cool I cant describe it! Also the cover is totally rockin'. Fits the theme perfectly!

I absolutely love the cover of your book is so whimsical. As I have said a few times to people try putting your dialogue away from the text to make it easier to read. Looking forward to reading more! Great beginning ~Faith

A young woman holding to her fairy tales in escape of the reality of her life is a storyline that should grab many readers. The author clearly has a wonderful style of describing this dream world but sometimes the juxtaposition with her real life is rough. That can easily lead to confusion on the part of the reader. I don’t mean the life itself ('rough' would be an understatement), but here I mean the writing transitions. The dialogue is good, realistic and alive.

On the passages of Faylynn’s(sp?) real life I sense sometimes the author is holding back. The written passages do not reflect the depth of the misery she must feel. Where she looses her father there is real feeling and one gets a glimpse of the author’s talent. I sense the author has much more depth yet to be discovered. So,author,Amaratu I say, let the spirit of pixie dust prevail and give readers a new voice that must be aching to be borne.

the second-to-last chapter was really confusing, because i didn't know who was who or anything...

either way i liked the story of Faylinn.

Did you come up with her name because FAiries are also known as "Fay"?

Wow! Really well written with beautiful imagery :) Very enjoyable to read with great descriptions and dialogues. I take my hat off to you. Chapeau! :)

I enjoyed your story I am interested in where you are going. I have also written about fairies, love the fantasy. Serena