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An interesting story. You evoke some very colorful and indelible imagery.
I'm a fan of flash fiction. Your work here leaves an image that provides the setting, yet leaves the reader with many questions.
It's brevity requires the reader to come to their own conclusions as to who, what, when, where, why and how the characters came to be and where they are going.
Wanting more... it's how a great flash fiction piece should leave the reader. Great job.
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