A good start. Well written. Hope you continue the story.
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fieryice600
Okay!! I am hopefully going to finish chapter two today.
James Gerard
Now the story is heating up. You threw a good twist into the story that was surprising. I see the relationship between Cody and Alexandria developing. You're doing a much better job with the formatting.
fieryice600
thanks.
thank you so much rachel!
Your welcome! :)